Porn with Plot/Porn without Plot or Whatever

I have two separate musings which feed into each other in my head; don’t know if I can bring that to life on paper but hey…let’s give it a shot.
Conclusion-Sam-Dean-Winchester-Forever
I’m watching season five again and just noticing for the first time, how increasingly miserable Sam gets as he sees the consequences of freeing Lucifer unfold. It begins with the classic Winchester reaction to tew much anything; RUN. Except I think while he intended to walk, he really thought that Dean would tell him , “No, please, Sam, Stay with me”, because we all know Sam likes to leave only when Dean wants him to stay. But then Dean never does try to ‘make’ him stay but I think that he knows, the deep down, ‘he’ll be back.’
This thought was brought to me because I read a fanfiction set in a post dystopian walking dead universe in which Sam wants to find other people and Dean is holding him back because he’s ‘afraid that Sam will leave him if he meets other people’…I’m finding that the more I get to know these boys, the more I get upset when people arbitrarily change their personalities to such an extent that you want to say, “Bitch, Dean would never!”…or quite honestly, less often, “Sam wouldn’t do that!” because let’s face it, there is a myriad places Sam would go that Dean just wouldn’t.
Which comes to my second thought that I had which was about Sam saying in Season 8 in that iconic finale, “You have no idea how it feels when you’re own brother…”

Sam, I’m gonna let you finish but let me take you back to Dark Side of the Moon where you basically chose some random brace face chick over your brother, some stray dog, and Stanford. Okay, continue.
And finally, I know that y’all waiting for the porn part…
drawing of Sam and Dean
Its hellatus; so we entertain ourselves with past episodes and fan fiction. I fear though, that I’m running out of good stories to read. There is some stellar writing out there but I feel like I’ve reached that place where I’m reading the same story in different guises. The only thing that is saving me is that being late to the party, I have like ten years of stories to catch up on. When I go further back, to the earlier stories,there are some brilliant alternate universes created.
tall boys
I was especially impressed with the one where the brothers encountered elementals and started manifesting wings in Dean’s case and ability to manipulate the earth in Sam’s. I can’t remember if it was the same story but the wings turned out to be Dean’s soul and Sam was irrestably attracted to them. They thought it was a wing fetish at first…anyway, brilliant writing, evocative of the emotional connection, not bogged down with too much of the ‘mechanics’.
Diana Gabaldon wrote a blog post on writing about sex; she said that the mechanics are fairly straightforward things.
sex posns
And therefore as a storyteller, you don’t need to belabour the point. You can go on to describe other things about it; the emotional response, the analogies about exploding planets (to describe orgasms obviously), imagery, the thoughts of one or both of the participants as they do it…
Lately it seems every fic I read has SAM throwing DEAN against a wall/dresser/tree/bed/tent/church/stool/bench/diner and then telling him how gorgeous he is as he uses his superhumanly strong body to toss him about, remove his clothes…are you tired yet? no, okay, then he has a humongous dick that Dean is always fascinated/salivating/dying for (in spite of the fact that he’s forever a butt virgin – I tell you as far as I know the standard reactions of virgins to big penises is fear). Another thing I don’t get about these stories is the inner dialogue of the aggressor be it Sam or Dean. I mean, apparently you’ve been dying for your brother’s butt for like EVER but now that you have it, you wanna pause…smell the roses…admire his backside all day…whatever bullshit that GIRLS normally think of during sex. I mean, once the penis is erect, ain’t no blood left to perfuse the brain to power thinking about how ‘beautiful’ or whatever the other body looks like. its all, dammit, touch, want, now. You can’t have your cake and eat it. either they’ve been lusting crazily for years and this is their opportunity to get it in…or they’re a couple of chicks on some romantic fantasy trip. I mean have you met Dean? even on a normal day he has no time for rainbows and butterflies – you really think he’s gonna be pausing to ‘want to look at Sam all day’ or whatever other bullshit people come up with? like really? Its very important to realise when you’re not writing true to the character, you’re not getting in their heads; you’re staying in your head and transferring your own soppy romantic tiresome notions to your character. and that’s how you lose the reader.
resting bitch face

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2 responses to “Porn with Plot/Porn without Plot or Whatever

    • Yes I have read ALL of gekizetsu’s work. It is generally epic.
      I actually watched season 10 live as well and I must say watching and then reading the tweets is like twice the fun. I can’t wait to see what they do about the fact that there was this great big pile of black smoke allegedly taking over the world. the Ackles-directed episode seems fun too.

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